Conversation

A lonely street
Carpet of dry leaves and seeds
crunching as they get crushed beneath our feet
Wind playing a soulful beat
as it plays with the branches of the trees
We walk together side by side
Wind plays with my hair
pasting them on my face
you stop, you turn towards me
slide hair off my eyes
smile
take my hand
and we walk again
That was the best conversation I had with you.

A walk together

Image courtesy Art4heart

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16 thoughts on “Conversation

  1. hello friend, I have only one word for this poem..WOW, what imagery you have painted in this very well constructed piece, hope your pen flows forever πŸ™‚

  2. Don’t you continue to amaze me or what??

    I’m addicted to romantic poems.. and silent conversations πŸ™‚
    Where the eye and the touch do the whole talking ..sigh!

  3. You are a great writer. I love the way you make me feel like I am the one experiencing it all. Keep up the wonderful work! Thank you for leaving a nice comment on my blog. I was away, so sorry for the late response. Have a great week. πŸ™‚

  4. Nanno1982: Thanks for dropping by πŸ™‚ Silent conversations are indeed the best. Words are quite often inadequate.

    Jingle: Ya it was getting increasingly depressing so time for a change πŸ™‚

    PaulAndrewRussel: Thank you πŸ™‚ Glad you liked it.

    Doraz: Glad to see you here Doraz. Thank you for the kind words πŸ™‚

    Bakfire: I owe it all to you, o my mentor πŸ™‚ But Im still way behind your level.

    Richajn: Thanks πŸ™‚

  5. Weird ! Don’t tell me you are talking on the lines of you-say-it-best-when-you-say-nothing-at-all ! If so, I surrender πŸ™‚

  6. Sri Tatsat: Egg-zaactly my dear. Incidentally that one happens to be my all time favs (Ya ya I know…dats soo girly. So be it πŸ˜› )

    William: This when I was feeling so happy with myself for writing a sweet poem 😦 Cmon! This is surely not a doom and gloom poem.

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